Task 7

Feeback Assessment:

	Most significant feedback comments	What they really mean
1. July Maden	Data limited only in context of Nepal. Missing information including piracy.	According to July's feedback I did not do much research about the music industry globally and also I was unable the bring the music piracy part in my presentation.
2. Priyanka Panday	Could have done more research about western influences to the music industry of Nepal. Voice was not clear.	I did not relate to western music industry and due to lack of practice, my voice and gestures were not satisfactory.
3. Bidan Shrestha	Analytical tools were not effective.	I could have added piracy as a weakness and threat to music industry.

Extend to which I agree with the feedback	Positive	Critical
	Things I did which attracted Positive feedback	Things I did which attracted Negative feedback
1. July Maden	Large understanding of Nepalese music industry. My passion and experience are the positive points which helps me to continue in this industry.	In my research done so far, I did not include the facts and data of music industry as a whole.
2. Priyanka Panday	Very much passionate about music. Was very clear about the music industry in Nepal.	Lack of eye contact and body language. Could have made the summary sheet more attractive.
3. Bidan Shrestha	Good start. My passion towards music, experience and talent make me a suitable candidate for music industry.	Lack of information about key concepts and major players of music industry.

Notes about any recurring trends in the feedback I am receiving.
	Things I can do to build on the positive feedback in my future work:	Things I can do to address critical feedback in my future work.
1. July Maden	Have more practice, gain more experience, build up confidence and research further.	I have to work more on my research about music industry globally.
2. Priyanka Panday	Have eye contact with the audiences and use gestures.	I have to improve my presentation skills.
3. Bidan Shrestha	Research more about the current situation of music industry.	I need to be updated about the industry and include the piracy trend as well.

The single most important thing for me to keep me doing in any future work on the basis of this feedback:

According to the feedback given by my friends, I need to keep researching more about the trend of music industry not only of Nepal but also of music around the world. I should enhance my talent by gaining more experience and practices.

The single most important thing for me to improve in my future work on the basis of this feedback.

I should work on my presentation skills to present more confidently and work on my body language and gestures.